Sunday, April 26, 2009

Walk with me


O
Girl
Listen
Hold my hand
Think of us as one
And come; walk with me till the end.
Do not think too much
Right or wrong
Love me.
Come
Along.

Written on: April 22, 2009 at: The Writers Lounge.

5 comments:

  1. Tan i really love this one.. this is what i wud like to share with my love.

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  2. A very seductive invitation -- I love the simplicity of this piece, a few words that speaks volume.

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  3. That was just short and sweet.. liked it very much..

    Haiku

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  4. @ Anonymous

    Thanks for the comment... do share it ... hope s/he likes :)

    @ Amias

    You got it all right Amias... thanks for the read and the encouragement :)

    @ Nitu

    Thanks for reading me... I am still writing more...

    @ Workhard

    Welcome to my blog. Thanks for appreciating my work. Come back again.

    Cheers!!

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Thanks for reading me and choosing to comment. Your comment always encourages me to write more and write sense. Keep visiting, whenever you can and comment on the posts. I will be more than eager to receive your comments and suggestions.

Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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