Saturday, April 25, 2009

Irresistible


Here
Are
The Words
I told you
Whenever I held you
Close to my face, close to my heart
Right in to your heart
"I Love you"
It’s true –
Bare
Fair

Written on: April 21, 2009 at: The Writers Lounge.

Posted by Tan Categories: , ,

2 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)April 27, 2009 at 3:20 PM

    You have mastered this style, and it's very good. So many times long long poems lose the message it's trying to impart, but short ones go right to the heart.

    What's with this comment approval?

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  2. TanApril 30, 2009 at 5:03 AM

    Thanks a lot Amias... I'm happy that it could reach thy heart!

    I removed the Comment Moderation. It was Silly!!

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