Friday, April 17, 2009

Please don’t go


Don’t
Go.
Not now.
Not after
You made me love you.
For, I would always miss you too.
If you go away
Tell me how
Would I
Live,
Love?
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Learnt this form of poetry at: Of something 'n' Everything
Also posted at: The Writers Lounge
Syllable Count: 1-1-2-3-5-8-5-3-2-1-1

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7 comments:

  1. Story TellerApril 17, 2009 at 1:27 PM

    Nice Poem... Nice style...

    There is a new prompt at TaT. We are waiting for your participation.

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  2. RajlakshmiApril 17, 2009 at 1:28 PM

    I loved this form... very challenging :)
    cleverly written...

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  3. SonshuApril 17, 2009 at 6:14 PM

    Nice Poem....Really good style. Check out my blog.. i write poems and stories...

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  4. RoshniApril 17, 2009 at 8:17 PM

    short and meaningful this poem is.. loved it. ive got the same question, waiting for an answer..hopefully will be answered soon..

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  5. TanApril 20, 2009 at 12:41 PM

    @ Story Teller

    I will try my best to participate in this week's prompt. Thanks for the info :)

    @ Rajalakshmi

    Welcome to my blog. Thanks for following it. Keep visiting and reading me more. Happy to see you liked it :)

    @ Princess Sonshu

    Welcome to my blog, mate. You see, I'm experimenting with a few styles. Want to try out as much as possible...
    I will surely check your blog. Surely...

    @ Roshni

    Dont ask questions if you are unsure of the answer. Well, I dont follow it all the time myself, but felt like telling you.
    Thanks for reading me. Do you have a blog/webpage?

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  6. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)April 20, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    You will find another love and move on ... but I understand where you are coming from with this poem .. I have said it too many time in my life.

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  7. TanApril 20, 2009 at 5:44 PM

    Amias, Love is natural... and at times, its like seasons... One of my teachers used to say in school: "Coming and Going, doing nothing." Well, love does that often and still is so lovely!

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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