Love
Hurts
Shove
Darts
In
Heart
Being
Smart.
Can’t
Smile
Rant
Pile
Spry
Cloud
Cry
Loud
On
Knees
None
Sees
Seize!
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Tried to write a Sonnet. A Bit Sized Sonnet, as showed by Pratibha. However, A Sonnet has only 14 lines and this poem exceeds that. So, it cannot be called a Sonnet. Hmmm... Will try again sometime... Till then, enjoy this :)
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hmm not sure what to say about this.. good.. keep trying.. love hurts is the message i get.. bit sized sonnet.. good try.. u learning a lot these days..
ReplyDeleteIts not a Bit Sized Sonnet, Anonymous... Will try to make one soon :)
ReplyDeleteYou started writing about the joys of love sometime back, now the darkness or lost of love have inspired you. Yes, love hurts, but we all know it hurts so good ... and pain makes for good poetry.
ReplyDeleteLove hurts... Expectations hurt more... thats were I came from and wrote this, Amias... Lol!
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