तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर मुस्कान पे जान निसार करना चाहता हूँ
तेरी होटों में मुझे इकरार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी निगाह कुछ बेकरार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर नज़र में मैं प्यार भरना चाहता हूँ
तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर मुस्कान पे जान निसार करना चाहता हूँ ...
I tried to write a triolet in Hindi here. I always try to experiment with different forms of poetry and story writing. I enjoy writing in all the languages I know. I started writing in Bengali and English and later on, I moved to Hindi too. I will try to write a few more Hindi poems following different styles. Let’s see if my readers like my trials.
Well, enjoy reading me!
I loved this poem.. teri har ada par pyar aya..
ReplyDeleteDhanyabaad!!
ReplyDeleteDidnt you like the picture?? Its too good... looks like a child age pic of one of my friends ... hehehe. ...
ReplyDeleteIt is soooo cute! The kid too! It feels like some1 dedicated it to the kid!
ReplyDeleteHey Rashi, isnt the Kid toooooo beautiful?? I miss my friend and wish we could be together, when I see this pic...
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking the poem :)
2-3 lines are good
ReplyDeleteother's are not good
lines that are good are
1,2,3,6