Wednesday, April 1, 2009

तेरी निगाह



तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर मुस्कान पे जान निसार करना चाहता हूँ
तेरी होटों में मुझे इकरार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी निगाह कुछ बेकरार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर नज़र में मैं प्यार भरना चाहता हूँ
तेरी हर बात में मुझे प्यार नज़र आता है
तेरी हर मुस्कान पे जान निसार करना चाहता हूँ ...


I tried to write a triolet in Hindi here. I always try to experiment with different forms of poetry and story writing. I enjoy writing in all the languages I know. I started writing in Bengali and English and later on, I moved to Hindi too. I will try to write a few more Hindi poems following different styles. Let’s see if my readers like my trials.
Well, enjoy reading me!

6 comments:

  1. I loved this poem.. teri har ada par pyar aya..

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  2. Didnt you like the picture?? Its too good... looks like a child age pic of one of my friends ... hehehe. ...

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  3. It is soooo cute! The kid too! It feels like some1 dedicated it to the kid!

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  4. Hey Rashi, isnt the Kid toooooo beautiful?? I miss my friend and wish we could be together, when I see this pic...

    Thanks for liking the poem :)

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  5. 2-3 lines are good
    other's are not good
    lines that are good are
    1,2,3,6

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