Once when I was sleeping
Perhaps in a deep dream
Piercing my ears, my phone rang
One of my friends had called
Rudely, I talked to him
Then put down the phone
Unnoticed, what he wanted to say!
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Now, he’s in the moon. And
I’m still dreaming. He called me
To accompany, but I did not listen!
Yes, an opportunity was lost!
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Wrote this for: Acrostic Only (Opportunity)
6 years ago
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I hate losing opportunities ... especially when they they would have benefited me. Glad you are back Tan.
ReplyDeletehmm
ReplyDeletedeep thought
Nice !! but not your best .. something was missing :|
ReplyDeleteAgree with Pretty Me, but still good use.
ReplyDeleteYes, those opportunities come around seldom enough.
ReplyDeleteLost opportunities...very nicely written.
ReplyDelete@ Amias, Chirag, Anthony, Ofira
ReplyDeleteThis was a kind of a joke... I wanted to make it more hilarious, but then... I could not, I suppose!!
@ Pratibha, Sudharam
You said it all right. As Amias says, I rush through at times and that really makes my creation a bit wayward... will take care from now on and write something that you would love more... thanks a lot for your comments, mates... Pratibha, you know it all, dont you?
Thanks :)