Sunday, April 26, 2009

Your smell

Your smell
Lingers after you go
Stays with me when I am alone
Your stench

Written on: April 21, 2009 in The Writers Lounge.


  1. Tan this was beautiful until I got to the last line.

    "Stench" is a foul odors ... "aroma" might have been a better word, that is, unless you are intoxicated by "foul odors".

  2. Ugh.... that had mixed feelings more on the ughh side..

    Haiku poetry

  3. Amias,
    I used the word on purpose... to give that exact feeling... someone else told me about the word too, but then I think this suits better :)

    'ughh side'?? hahahaha... possibly!!


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