है तुझे कसम
तूफान में घिरके ना खोना अपने आपको
हर रह तेरी होगी बुलंदियों की और ।
है तुझे कसम
अपनी मौत ना बना लेना अपने खौफ को
उम्मीद से बांधले अपनी जीवन की डोर ॥
है तुझे कसम
काँटों को करने दे अपनी राहों की हिफाज़त
काँटों से घबराकर चलना ना छोर ।
है तुझे कसम
ये जीवन है सुख और दुःख की बनावट
दुःख से घबरा कर अपनी रहे ना मोर ।।
Crossposted at: The Writers Lounge on March 18, 2009
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I wonder why didn't anyone comment on this.
ReplyDeleteIts got so many Hindi errors. :P
Nevertheless, that's okay.....
The message got coneveyed, that's more important.
I loved it.
And I can't leave without adding my favourite one here:
Tu shaaheen hai, parwaa.Z hai kaam tera
Tere saamne aasmaaN aur bhi haiN.
You are a rockstar Tan. I really liked this one :)
Hehehe Ilashree,
ReplyDeletePlease point out all the mistaked I have made... (b4 anyone else sees those :P)
I really need a mentor in writing Hindi. I find none. I have actually asked a few people to guide me through, but then - everyone is busy, you see... No one has time for me...
Help me if you can... That would do only good, isnt it??
Cheers!!!
good tan
ReplyDeleteu are improving
well done