Saturday, February 28, 2009

Love You Dear


Let’s share life
Once more
Violating the rules. Now,
Even more

Years passed
Over the edge
Under the same roof

Dealt with life
Every time
And again
Reassessing all proof'!


Crossposted this in The Writer's Lounge on February 23, 2009

5 comments:

  1. Tan a beautiful poem for ur love, ur wife.. all the best..

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  2. Beautiful! How do you manage to pen down such short yet wonderful lines!? Amazing man!

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  3. Thanks Bhargav for liking this ... Keep visiting and reading me more ... bhaal lagibo :)

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  4. This one is a winner. Well done.

    love-bd

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  5. Thanks BD ... for reading and liking it ... It was one try towards an Acrostic Poetry ... Happy to see you liked it :)

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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