Friday, February 27, 2009

Good Bye My Friend

As I say good bye
I love you, but I am shy
I hope this is no end
GOOD BYE MY FRIEND
I hope this is no end
I love you, but I am shy
As I say good bye

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7 comments:

  1. Wendy NaisaFebruary 27, 2009 at 5:26 AM

    Hi Tan, thanks for posting this, it's always exciting to read new work, and this is no exception. I sincerely hope that it is not the end of your love, as you say goodbye!

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  2. Priyanka KhotFebruary 27, 2009 at 12:18 PM

    saying by to friends is always heart-breaking. Having said bye to several of my friends in the recent days... I can totally relate to the poem.

    Nice work.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2009 at 4:08 PM

    Saying goodbye like breaking up, can be the hardest thing to do - this opens up a whole range of emotions for me. It's good when a piece of poetry lik this can have such an effect!

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2009 at 10:04 PM

    hey tan, it was wonderful and it required a lot of creativity which you have rightfully put in..

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2009 at 12:07 AM

    This is tough! Wah! As I always feel when I read you, you are connected to your emotions!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 2, 2009 at 5:40 PM

    Tan I love this short poems, (naisaikus) short but so meaningful. beautiful written.. why goodbye?

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  7. TanMarch 4, 2009 at 10:34 PM

    @ Wendy

    Thanks for liking it ... Let me assure you, this is not the END of my LOVE ... this cannot be, as there would be no END at all ... thanks for the wishes ...

    @ Priyanka

    Thanks for visiting my blog. I'm happy that you liked it and could 'totally' relate to the same ... I'm honoured ...

    @ Andy

    That was a good complement ... the words should say and show what I wanted to say ... if that is done, I'm most happy!!

    @ Kajal/TPO

    Thanks for liking this ... creativity? Hehehe ... this is the only string that binds all the bloggers (beeds) together ... Thanks for your regular visits ...

    @ Rashi/RV

    I like to write what I feel ... and at times, I write exactly the opposite of what I feel ... this is an experiment I do regularly ... I'm happy that you liked it ... Keep visiting ...

    Cheers!!!!

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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