Friday, February 13, 2009

NaisaiKu: Will You Love Me Too

I cry my heart out
Can you see me crying, my love
Will you hold me close?
WILL YOU LOVE ME TOO?
Will you hold me close?
Can you see me crying, my love
I cry my heart out


Learnt this style of writing from NaisaiKu..

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11 comments:

  1. NavchawlaFebruary 13, 2009 at 11:47 PM

    Nice style..it wud look awesome if u rhyme the words and make a lengthier poem!

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2009 at 1:13 AM

    wonderful tan!

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  3. TanFebruary 14, 2009 at 2:05 AM

    Thanks Kajal/TPO
    Naveen, the basic idea of writing a NaisaiKu is to end it in this three lines and the composition has to be like this, as much as I understood ... Please check the link to the NaisaiKu Blog above and I am sure you will get an idea on the same ... Try something on your own and let us read it ... :)

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2009 at 2:51 AM

    Hi Tan, many thanks for taking up the NaisaiKu.. challenge!

    I Enjoyed reading this!

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2009 at 2:58 AM

    Wow! Tan this is amazing and so timely for Saint Valentine's day too. It's so good that you could post this on your site for your elite friends and other visitors to read.

    I'm putting a link to your Bloggage from the NaisaiKu.. site!

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  6. Ofira SephirothFebruary 14, 2009 at 5:39 AM

    Very nicely written and thanks for your comment.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2009 at 10:31 AM

    Good to see a good NaisaiKu!

    naisaiKuing

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2009 at 9:08 PM

    Whenever i read ur poetry, dil bhar ata hai, ankho se pani behene lagta hai.. u touch my heart with the beautiful poetry. simple yet stunning

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  9. TanFebruary 16, 2009 at 11:14 PM

    @ Sweet Talking Guy

    I enjoyed this new concept very much ... and I'm happy to have tried the same

    @ Wendy Naisa

    Thanks for liking it and putting my blog in your site. The timing was fully coincidental ... I wrote what I wanted to convey at that very point in time ... I'm happy that you liked it ...

    @ Ofira Sephiroth

    Thanks for visiting ... since you are following the blog now, I hope you will visit more from now on ...

    @ Gautami

    Thanks for visiting and leaving your blog here ... I have already visited that and will visit more ... keep visiting ...

    @ Ano...

    Thanks for commenting ... I'm happy that I could connect to you through my writing ... please leave your name and / or blog so that I can communicate or visit your site sometime ...

    Thanks to you all mates for visiting ... your comments encourage me a lot!

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  10. mysterious galFebruary 17, 2009 at 1:19 PM

    thats a cool style...its always a pleasure reading...i have been off scene for long i guess i need to buck up too now

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  11. TanFebruary 24, 2009 at 1:41 AM

    @ Mysterious Gal

    Yes, you are out for a long time now ... and I'm happy that you have come back and given time to my blog ... thanks for liking the style ... why dont you try something like this and let us all know about it? Give it a go and yes, keep visiting ... Cheers!!

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Thanks for reading me and choosing to comment. Your comment always encourages me to write more and write sense. Keep visiting, whenever you can and comment on the posts. I will be more than eager to receive your comments and suggestions.

Warm Regards,
Tan :)

PS: Please visit my other blog: Thus Spake Tan!

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