Tuesday, March 3, 2009

How much you love me

Even if you want to go
Even if you would never show
In the deepest of my heart, I will know
HOW MUCH YOU LOVE ME
In the deepest of my heart, I will know
Even if you would never show
Even if you want to go

4 More Wonderful NaisaiKus check: NaisaiKu Challenge III

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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 3, 2009 at 10:45 PM

    waah tan.. you are doing magic after magic.. truly :)

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  2. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 2:31 AM

    Hi Tan, this is one that benefits from being read aloud and repeated several times, I find. And every time I read 'How Much You Love Me' it further endorses the narrators love for the object of the poem. Clever stuff and subtle psychology!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 2:34 AM

    Hiya, How much I love THIS!! Thanks for playing along and writing another super piece and for taking the NaisaiKu.. Challenge! again this week.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 7:38 AM

    me likes!

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  5. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 2:05 PM

    Tan,such beautiful heart touching poetry... seems like u touch mine and many more hearts..keep reaching us.. we love u

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  6. TanMarch 4, 2009 at 10:09 PM

    @ Kajal & STG

    Thanks for liking it... Magic is all true when there is someone who's admiring it ... otherwise, its just timepass ... thanks for visiting my blog regularly ...

    The object of the Poem is my wife ... the most wonderful thing that has happened to me!!

    @ Wendy

    Thanks for liking this ... I'm amazed by this tecnique of writing and I'm happy that I came to know about it ... it gives me much pleasure creating and reading others writing NaisaiKus...

    @ TLB

    Thanks ... Keep visiting ...

    I appreciate all your complements and comments here ... thanks for all the support and love ... Cheers!!

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  7. AnonymousMarch 5, 2009 at 10:18 AM

    read it before but cud not comment .. so back now to say i like the simplicity of feelings here

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  8. spacedlawMarch 5, 2009 at 1:22 PM

    Beautiful!

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  9. TanMarch 5, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    Thanks Pratibha for spending time in here ... I do appreciate your visits and comments ...

    Spacedlaw, I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for visiting my blog and commenting here ... please do check out my english posts here and let me know if you like them ... your comments are valuable to me :)

    Cheers!!

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  10. I ZaydiMarch 5, 2009 at 9:14 PM

    woooooooooooow!

    I simply loved it man!

    its toooooo gooooooood!

    sach main udham hai!

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  11. Cassiopeia RisesMarch 5, 2009 at 11:16 PM

    Very Good!. I like this very much.

    love-bd

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  12. Sepiru ChrisMarch 6, 2009 at 7:33 PM

    I am completely in the same mindset as Sweet Talking Guy in his comment. Well done.

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  13. TanMarch 6, 2009 at 10:32 PM

    @ Insiya/illusiOn and BD

    Thanks for liking this ... I'm happy that you visited and read my poem here ... Please do visit again and read when you have time :)

    @ Chris

    Thanks for the visit mate ... STG is a person who actually tries to tel what I write ... I am happy you felt the same ... honoured! Keep visiting more :)

    Cheers!!

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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