She stood there in the cold
Hiding her shivering hand,
All alone, by herself
Digging down into the sand.
On her mind there is me
Whether she likes it or not,
Deep down inside her heart
And in whatever she has got!
Now tides were touching her feet
Cold, as cold as it would be
In the middle of nowhere,
Nelly was standing, thinking of me
God! That’s where I wanted to be.
Hiding her shivering hand,
All alone, by herself
Digging down into the sand.
On her mind there is me
Whether she likes it or not,
Deep down inside her heart
And in whatever she has got!
Now tides were touching her feet
Cold, as cold as it would be
In the middle of nowhere,
Nelly was standing, thinking of me
God! That’s where I wanted to be.
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Good Tan.
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I will write a post on Acrostic very soon .. good idea!
I really like this :) Very well written.
ReplyDeleteVery romantic and well written.
ReplyDeletePerfectly written. I love it :)
ReplyDeleteloved this dear !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned !!! :)
ReplyDeleteHey Tan, Check out YOUR OWN BLOG LINK under the category 'Rocking Bloggers' in
ReplyDeletehttp://helllottalinks.blogspot.com/ .
Be prepared to be assaulted. :-)
Be sure to JOIN in the 'follow my blog' option so I can send u some goodies anytime I come across some.
Let ur friends know about ur link.
Also do comment and suggest so I can make it yet better for u to use.
As a favour, let ur friends know about my blog. That wud be awsome...but only if u like it urself first.
Remember..It's FREE.
ENJOY....
ANand. :-)
Phew!, A rhyming acrostic!
ReplyDeleteReally a fabulous fable.. Loved your style and the thought process.
Well put!
Lovely is the word!
Thanks Amias, Bhargav, Ofira, Newbie Mommy, Pratibha and Nave ... Thanks for the visit and reading my writes ... Your words are the source of encouragement for me - so, do take some time out and visit my blog ... Thanks again!
ReplyDelete@ Anand
Thanks for adding my blog in your Hell Lotta Links ... I have already started following your blog ... I will keep visiting that, as usual and will try to put a few requests ... I tried to post two requests there, but the Word Verification keeps on loading and never ends ... So, putting them here:
Anand, a few requests:
First one is: Please add a ShoutBox in the blog where people can write instantly ... One more
Second: The Thumbnails of the Blogs carry the URL of them ... I would suggest you to put the names of the Blogs in there, instead of the URL - for that is a better way of recognizing a blog ...
Think and see if you can incorporate these things ...
Please remove the WORD VERIFICATION - its boring and unnecessary!!
@ Bharath
Thanks for all the wonderful words ... keep visiting and I will write more!!
Cheers mates!!
wow! i am awestruck...it was beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteWOW.... Daruuuuuuuun.... :)
ReplyDeleteVery romantic....... wanna be there
ReplyDeleteI just flitted by you on 20 something bloggers and wanted to say hello.
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying your stuff immensely, and hope to get back to read more later today.
In case you are interested I have redone an old blog at a site I had originally used for something else ( shouldbefamous.net) but I am taking poetry or rhymes ...some people can't write poetry like you,,, on the subject of fame. Check it out and if you want to post a poem send one in along with a picture if you want. I'd be delighted to have a poem there from you.
Nice to meet you by the way.
Interesting poem :)
ReplyDeleteGod! that is where i wanted to be..
ReplyDeletereally very nice poem.. mean u said the most true thing...tht everyone wants tht position in someones life. n u got tht.. u r luckiest..
I love the way men love women...it never ceases to amaze me.
ReplyDeleteI have been married 34 years and that expression of love is what makes it all a wonderful life. Love the romace...
TJ
@ Kajal/TPO, Lisa and Winnie
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for visiting and reading this ... This is another attempt to my experiment with words ... I am getting all kinds of new ideas from everywhere and trying to give it a try ... I'm so happy that you all liked it ...
@ Cooper
We shall talk about it ... I have sent you a mail ... please respond to that ...
@ Colors of Life
I'm lucky - no doubt!
The author wanted to be there, where he was wanted! (WOW - what did I write here now? lol)
And along with being lucky, I'm honored that you visited and read me here ... keep visiting :)
@ TJ
34 years!! No surprize for we Indians, where people remained married for scores of years and still keep on going, no matter if there is love or not! You are lucky to be in love still ... and so is your spouse ...
Wish you many more years of togetherness and love and hope you be in love for ever and ever!!
Thanks for the visit ...
Cheers!!
Nice one.
ReplyDeletesimple yet profound.
liked it much.
take care
Tan, u are getting better as the days go by.. a romantic peom, yeah definitely wud like to be there with love.. different styles of writing, u amaze me.
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