Saturday, March 7, 2009

A Love Sublime


She left
And then suddenly,
I felt left alone
Alone again
In the same corner of the world.
There I was
Where I was
Sitting for years all together
Gather nothing with passing time.
I know
I lost
A love sublime!

Linked in Sunday Scribblings #153 - "Listen up because this is important!"

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11 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)March 7, 2009 at 3:39 AM

    My goodness, I forgot how it felt to be young and in-love and not know it until I lost it... time is funny, looking back at it is not so bad as when I first felt the lost. Maybe there is something to getting old --- but until you get here, know that another "love sublime" will come alone many many times.

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  2. TanMarch 7, 2009 at 3:44 AM

    Perfectly said Amias ... it will come many many times, I believe!!

    Growing old in itself is a learning ... I'm happy to be growing old now ... as I admit it :)

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  3. AnonymousMarch 7, 2009 at 4:50 AM

    this could have fit last weeks prompt too. nice one!

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  4. AnonymousMarch 7, 2009 at 2:43 PM

    I want to comment but don't know what to say! So all I will say is I read you :D

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  5. Sherri B.March 7, 2009 at 6:53 PM

    This was beautiful...and the photo added to the yearning.

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  6. Linda JacobsMarch 8, 2009 at 3:33 AM

    Beautiful!

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  7. Tumblewords:March 8, 2009 at 8:11 AM

    Ah, beautiful work...

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  8. SPMarch 9, 2009 at 10:29 PM

    Beautiful Tan, I believe too, it will come many more times..

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  9. TanMarch 10, 2009 at 12:02 AM

    @ Floreta

    Thanks for the visit ... last week's prompt? What exactly you meant by this? Sorry to act dumb here ...

    @ Rashi/RV

    You read - I'm happy ... but not sure if you liked it too ... well, if you have something to tell here, do so ... that will do only good to me :)

    @ Fledging Poet

    Thanks for visiting and reading me ... I'm happy that you liked it too ... Keep coming here more often ...

    @ Linda & Tumblewords

    Thanks mates for visiting and reading me ... I felt better to see you liked the poem too ... keep reading, and as promised, I will write more :)

    @ Roshni

    Love comes - knocks - goes away ... the ones that stay are truly precious :) Thanks for the read ... keep visiting ...

    Cheers!!

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  10. AnonymousMarch 10, 2009 at 10:46 AM

    I likes !!

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  11. TanMarch 11, 2009 at 8:38 PM

    Thanks Pratibha ... I likes that you likes ...

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