A winter morning
With lots of dew drops on grass
Is all I see now
***^**^***
Living loveless life
Like a bunch of frost topped grapes
Brisk, but motionless
***^**^***
Dark cloud brings the rain
I walk to you, breaking rules
But it rains again
***^**^***
The first drop of dew
On a winter morning here
Smells like perfect love
***^**^***
He took his brushes
And painted the blank canvas
To Monalisa
With lots of dew drops on grass
Is all I see now
***^**^***
Living loveless life
Like a bunch of frost topped grapes
Brisk, but motionless
***^**^***
Dark cloud brings the rain
I walk to you, breaking rules
But it rains again
***^**^***
The first drop of dew
On a winter morning here
Smells like perfect love
***^**^***
He took his brushes
And painted the blank canvas
To Monalisa
My first attempts at Haiku. Posted in The Writers Lounge on March 4, 2009
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they are all good, the best for me was (I walk to you breaking rules), short and sweet haikus..
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking it ... as always!! You seem to be biased!! hehehe ... read on!
ReplyDeleteNot much of a poem person, HOWEVER,
ReplyDeleteI love haiku poems.
Something about Haiku is real comforting.
My vote would be the Mona Lisa. Awesome!
Can't believe they were your first attempts >.<
Thanks Usha for your comments... these are really my first ones... learnt it through a blog friend and wrote these... Happy to know you liked them... keep visiting :)
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