Monday, March 30, 2009

Here am I


Here am I
Back to you
Ready to fly
Here am I
Will give it a try
To get to you
Here am I
Back to you!
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Learnt of Triolet form of poetry from The Miss Rumphius Effect.
Thanks to Rashi for pointing me to this.



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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 31, 2009 at 12:22 AM

    Aww I got a mention :D

    This was wonderfully simple! :D Brilliant!

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  2. AnonymousMarch 31, 2009 at 2:36 PM

    I waited here so long
    patiently for you,all time
    holding to my last hopes
    I waited here so long
    last time,to me you told
    you will teach me to fly.
    I waited here so long
    patiently for you,all time

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  3. AnonymousMarch 31, 2009 at 2:36 PM

    just felt like answering you like this... :)

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  4. AnonymousApril 2, 2009 at 12:23 AM

    triolet, new, i love this poetry tan.. stunning.. and im so happy to see u back :) hope you had a good break..

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  5. TanApril 3, 2009 at 12:15 AM

    Thanks Rashi/RV

    Happy to see you liked it. Thanks again for teaching me this...

    @ Pratibha/PM

    That was a wonderful comment!! W O W!!!! I'm so happy to see you here and in this fashion. I loved it!

    @ Anonymous

    Yes, I had a good break. Thanks for your regular visits. How long will you keep yourself incognito??

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Tan :)

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