Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Liberation


Let me be free
In my road ahead
Believe me, its
End of my day
Release and let go
And bind me not
Till I run free
I want to be
On my own way
Not to be caged again

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Written for Acrostic Only : Liberation

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15 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMay 6, 2009 at 2:52 AM

    A great feeling you conjur up here.

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  2. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)May 6, 2009 at 3:04 AM

    This is what happen when one has been too confined. I enjoyed burst of freedom Tan.

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  3. TanMay 6, 2009 at 3:10 AM

    Thanks Anthony and Amias... Confinement was tough - Liberation is happening!!!

    Thanks for the two prompts, Amias :)

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  4. Andy SewinaMay 6, 2009 at 3:10 AM

    Phew, wise words, we all want to be free, but tell me, how do I get out of this cage of my own making?

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  5. TanMay 6, 2009 at 3:11 AM

    Cage of your own making, Andy? Get a hammar (You know what the hammar is, since you made the cage yourself)... strike it hard...

    Best of Luck...

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  6. floretaMay 6, 2009 at 3:52 AM

    i suppose this is what we would all hope for..

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  7. Tumblewords:May 6, 2009 at 5:42 AM

    Ah, I can feel it even now -

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  8. BarbMay 6, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    Once again your way with words is stunning. :)

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  9. Reader WilMay 6, 2009 at 5:57 PM

    A very appropriate poem, for we celebrated our day of liberation yesterday! Thanks.

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  10. RajlakshmiMay 6, 2009 at 6:26 PM

    very liberating write... well penned :)

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  11. Dee MartinMay 6, 2009 at 7:19 PM

    It's interesting that you write a poem about being free using an acrostic which is a very confining form I would think. Makes for an interesting contrast :)

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  12. nituscornerMay 6, 2009 at 9:55 PM

    Like i always say....don't cage me ...am a free bird. hehehe!!!!

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  13. TanMay 7, 2009 at 2:07 AM

    Floreta

    Welcome to my blog. Yes, some time or the other, we all would want to be liberated!

    Tumblewords

    You could feel what I wrote? Ah! This is what I write for. Thank you so much for visiting again.

    Skittles

    Welcome back to my blog. Your visits are scanty these days. Thanks for the comment.

    Reader Wil

    Welcome to my blog. Where are you from? Which country celebrated freedom? Please enlighten me...

    Rajlakshmi

    Thanks a lot! Welcome to Thus Wrote Tan!

    Dee Martin

    You know what? Amias will be very happy reading this comment. She is the one who made it possible - to ignite me!! Writing a confined format of poem on Liberation. I never thought it so, before I read your comment. You told it all - the very basic of the poem. Thanks for the insight. Keep reading me and keep visiting :)

    Nitu

    Yes! Its all we feel - you, me and everyone else... not to be caged anyways!! Be liberated - always :)

    Cheers!!

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  14. linda mayMay 9, 2009 at 12:02 PM

    Liberation is something you have got to grab for yourself. But be careful what you wish for, if you get it, it might not be what you wanted in the first place.Point in case women's liberation.

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  15. Arun KumarMay 17, 2009 at 8:07 AM

    nice one man..
    For the acrostic contest...?? wud be a good entry...

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Tan :)

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