Wednesday, May 13, 2009

All I got...

Continued from Hashan’s Black Poetry : The eternal sleep !!


Love is
All I needed
From you lord and from her
All I got was this lonely grave
And death!


Crossposted at: The Writers Lounge on May 6, 2009

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6 comments:

  1. SonshuMay 15, 2009 at 12:27 AM

    Seriously all loungers are on darkness or vamp spree! Anyways...amazingly written as always..

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  2. SushmitaMay 15, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    hmmm...beautiful tale tell short:)
    didnt find it dark, but it's beautiful:)

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  3. fms1988May 15, 2009 at 10:26 PM

    Beautiful !!!!!!!!!

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  4. OpaqueMay 17, 2009 at 1:42 AM

    Strong, intense explained precisely making it stronger and immensely intense. Thus, great job!!! Keep writing!!!

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  5. Arun KumarMay 17, 2009 at 8:05 AM

    hmm ...very sad...simple n sharp poem...love it...
    Followin ur blog mate...i'm ur 40th (woh !!) follower... :-)

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  6. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)May 17, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    Oh this is such a wonderful thought provoking and true poem. Very creative.

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