Thursday, May 7, 2009

Liberation (2)

Is all I seek
Beleaguered roads
Eternal containments
Recommends freedom
All I get is
Tall dominance
Intolerable restraints
Oh don’t dominate me
Not now – not ever

Written (again) for Acrostic Only : Liberation


  1. WONDERFUL! I love ur style of writing! Keep up the good work..Nice acrostic!

  2. nice :) lets see wat u post finally !!

  3. good write man...postin it for the contest??
    it wud be good if u aligned it to the right...with LIBERATION coming in a straight line... :) just my thought...


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