I slept for long, it seems
- As I woke up this morning
- And I stretched my hands for her,
- I found the pillows alone,
- One night stand was over!
I slept for long, it seems
- She woke up before I did
- And she left before dawn,
- I could still hear her moans around me
- Her smell was not yet gone.
I slept for long, I feel
- When I look around my room
- The last night flashed in my head,
- I saw the moon in my arms
- In the comfort of my bed.
I slept for long, I knew
- When I rubbed my eyes and sat up
- And my gaze rummaged around,
- I see my kingdom as it was
- But my queen was not to be found.
I slept for long, I’m afraid
- I found a note, she left
- On a beautiful pink paper, it says
- “Good Morning, my honeycomb,
- “Welcome to the world of AIDS!”
Cross posted at: The Writers Lounge
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2 years ago
Very effective message! I think I'll read it to my high school students!
ReplyDeleteTan, there you are!
ReplyDeletethus wrote Tan! is this fiction or real?
:)
Thank You Linda for the words... Do you really think you can read this out to your pupils? WOW!! Thats an honour in itself :)
ReplyDeleteAnd Amity dear,
What made you ask that?? LOL!!
Please be assured - its all FICTION :)
Just tried to convey a message ...
A message well conveyed..like it..
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition.
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Message conveyed in a strong and interesting way..
ReplyDeletereally imp message....n conveyed so well..!
ReplyDeletenyc way 2 spread awareness.....gud attempt.
ReplyDeletevery gud1 dude...i loved it
ReplyDeleteAnon, thanks for reading me...
ReplyDeleteGautami... I liked it too... same pinch ;)
Raisha, Lilian, Chaarz..
I'm happy that it conveyed - I would not be able to shout ...
FCF, welcome to my blog... thanks for reading and liking it...