Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Catch Me If You Can




Can’t stop
A wafting draft
Transient mood
Creeping fear
Hurrying time

My mind so fresh
Eternal strong

Inexorably, I will fly
Far away from you

You can never seize
One incredible mind
Unfettered soul

Coruscate world wide
Abnegate truth, you may
Nescience you, can’t stop me!

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Written For: Acrostic Only : Prompts for May 30th (Catch Me If You Can)

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12 comments:

  1. Winnie the poohiJune 3, 2009 at 7:26 PM

    Lot of new words :) ad beautiful thought.. ah yes.. strong mind can never be fettered :)

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  2. Arun KumarJune 3, 2009 at 11:01 PM

    nice acrostic bro....
    n a lotta new unknown words... had to run to the dictionary... ur vocabulary is really good....

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  3. UrmiJune 4, 2009 at 5:51 AM

    Thanks for your comment.Try mango chutney and then let me know how it is.
    Very beautiful poem. I liked it very much and the picture is also appropriate.

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  4. SavannahJune 5, 2009 at 12:08 AM

    I like the words you used. I like the ending.

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  5. The Great Brown ExperimentJune 6, 2009 at 2:05 PM

    Surprise for you on my blog ;)

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  6. roshwritesJune 6, 2009 at 10:37 PM

    Tan where have you been? I haven't seen you at my blog for some time now...
    It's a good poem, although I didn't know some words :)
    roshwrites

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  7. SAHITYIKAJune 8, 2009 at 8:51 AM

    hey nice poem..
    this is a kindda thing requires much effort..
    i dont think i will be able to write such kind of poem..
    i dont hav gud vocab ... :(

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  8. chhandikJune 13, 2009 at 1:35 PM

    Khub sundor hoyechhe.
    Shomoy kore amar blog eo ghure jeo. Notun kobita post korechhi.

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  9. roshwritesJune 14, 2009 at 11:04 PM

    Hey Tan, how did you lock your blog? So it cannot be copied? I'd like to do that so I'd appricate you telling me how to do it :) Thank you!

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  10. CRDJune 19, 2009 at 7:50 PM

    nice poem dude...and they say women are better poets..bah! :P


    About ur comment on my "weird story"...dude, i know the spelling is L-I-Q-U-O-R...but thats what my weird stories are all about...they give words and phrases new meanings.

    Anyway, Cheers

    CRD :)

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  11. CRDJune 19, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    nice poem dude...and they say women are better poets..bah! :P


    About ur comment on my "weird story"...dude, i know the spelling is L-I-Q-U-O-R...but thats what my weird stories are all about...they give words and phrases new meanings.

    Anyway, Cheers

    CRD :)

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  12. AnonymousJune 20, 2009 at 8:30 PM

    nice, well written.....all the best :)

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