Friday, November 13, 2009

Girl in the rain



There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I keep wondering
Who’s she?

Her hair is wet
She looks so great
I wish we’d met
Before.

She looks here and there
With eyes full of scare
There’s none around her
She’s alone.

I see through this glass
The distance between us
There’s a road I can’t pass
It’s jammed.

I can’t see her face
Amidst this menace
It’ll be real disgrace
If she leaves.

As she quiver
I step out of my car
And I walk towards her
In faith.

Seeing me come her way
She smiles at me, nay
She hurries away
In the rain.

Why would she just go?
I just want to know
Did she see me before?
Anyways…

There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I’ve a feeling within
That’s you!

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...A dedication to myself and my beautiful wife on 12 years completion of our journey in love...

8 More thoughts:

Amity Me said...

Hi Tan,

she must only be an apparition, but you thought all the way that she's real...:)

or she might be a girl in your past whom you played so much trick and now she's haunting coz if it's not, she should not have walked away when you came near her...:)

well, if it's real, this story of yours, it's a sad one, but it it's fiction, still it's a sad one Tan!

good morning...:)

stardust said...

Its lovely.... Especially the mystery...
Keep 'em coming !!

Annu said...

ur words are so touching.

Leo said...

u churn out a mystery masterpiece Tan :)
happy anniversary to u and the missus!

Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem. God bless you both..Congratulations to you and your wife. Wishing you a very happy life together.

Saraswathan said...

Hi Tan, Awesome dear, it Rocks.

*Shreya* said...

beautiful :)

vampire wutever said...

beautiful... :)

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