
There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I keep wondering
Who’s she?
Her hair is wet
She looks so great
I wish we’d met
Before.
She looks here and there
With eyes full of scare
There’s none around her
She’s alone.
I see through this glass
The distance between us
There’s a road I can’t pass
It’s jammed.
I can’t see her face
Amidst this menace
It’ll be real disgrace
If she leaves.
As she quiver
I step out of my car
And I walk towards her
In faith.
Seeing me come her way
She smiles at me, nay
She hurries away
In the rain.
Why would she just go?
I just want to know
Did she see me before?
Anyways…
There’s a girl in the rain
Hiding tears and her pain
I’ve a feeling within
That’s you!
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Hi Tan,
she must only be an apparition, but you thought all the way that she's real...:)
or she might be a girl in your past whom you played so much trick and now she's haunting coz if it's not, she should not have walked away when you came near her...:)
well, if it's real, this story of yours, it's a sad one, but it it's fiction, still it's a sad one Tan!
good morning...:)
Its lovely.... Especially the mystery...
Keep 'em coming !!
ur words are so touching.
u churn out a mystery masterpiece Tan :)
happy anniversary to u and the missus!
Beautiful poem. God bless you both..Congratulations to you and your wife. Wishing you a very happy life together.
Hi Tan, Awesome dear, it Rocks.
beautiful :)
beautiful... :)
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