Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Catch Me If You Can




Can’t stop
A wafting draft
Transient mood
Creeping fear
Hurrying time

My mind so fresh
Eternal strong

Inexorably, I will fly
Far away from you

You can never seize
One incredible mind
Unfettered soul

Coruscate world wide
Abnegate truth, you may
Nescience you, can’t stop me!


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Written For: Acrostic Only : Prompts for May 30th (Catch Me If You Can)

12 comments:

  1. Lot of new words :) ad beautiful thought.. ah yes.. strong mind can never be fettered :)

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  2. nice acrostic bro....
    n a lotta new unknown words... had to run to the dictionary... ur vocabulary is really good....

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  3. Thanks for your comment.Try mango chutney and then let me know how it is.
    Very beautiful poem. I liked it very much and the picture is also appropriate.

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  4. I like the words you used. I like the ending.

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  5. Surprise for you on my blog ;)

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  6. Tan where have you been? I haven't seen you at my blog for some time now...
    It's a good poem, although I didn't know some words :)
    roshwrites

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  7. hey nice poem..
    this is a kindda thing requires much effort..
    i dont think i will be able to write such kind of poem..
    i dont hav gud vocab ... :(

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  8. Khub sundor hoyechhe.
    Shomoy kore amar blog eo ghure jeo. Notun kobita post korechhi.

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  9. Hey Tan, how did you lock your blog? So it cannot be copied? I'd like to do that so I'd appricate you telling me how to do it :) Thank you!

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  10. nice poem dude...and they say women are better poets..bah! :P


    About ur comment on my "weird story"...dude, i know the spelling is L-I-Q-U-O-R...but thats what my weird stories are all about...they give words and phrases new meanings.

    Anyway, Cheers

    CRD :)

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  11. nice poem dude...and they say women are better poets..bah! :P


    About ur comment on my "weird story"...dude, i know the spelling is L-I-Q-U-O-R...but thats what my weird stories are all about...they give words and phrases new meanings.

    Anyway, Cheers

    CRD :)

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  12. nice, well written.....all the best :)

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