Thursday, May 7, 2009

I feel me in you


When I come to you
I see your love on your lips
I hear your heart beats
I FEEL ME IN YOU
I hear your heart beats
I see your love on your lips
When I come to you

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These are the most B-E-A-Utiful lips I have ever seen... This lady has the best pair!! The poem made me think of her..
Written for: Week Twelve of The NaiSaiKu Challenge

7 comments:

  1. Beautifully done, the lips really draw me in!

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  2. Hmmm...interesting :)
    First visit to ur blog mus say i like what i see.

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  3. I like the poem, beautiful as usual, the lady..hmm not sure.. and ur wife, she'll definitely be pleased nah?...watch it man..

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  4. one of my other frn also is fond of her lips... Now ur the second person who have shared similar thougts :)

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