Wednesday, May 13, 2009

All I got...

Continued from Hashan’s Black Poetry : The eternal sleep !!

Love is
All I needed
From you lord and from her
All I got was this lonely grave
And death!

Crossposted at: The Writers Lounge on May 6, 2009


  1. Seriously all loungers are on darkness or vamp spree! Anyways...amazingly written as always..

  2. hmmm...beautiful tale tell short:)
    didnt find it dark, but it's beautiful:)

  3. Strong, intense explained precisely making it stronger and immensely intense. Thus, great job!!! Keep writing!!!

  4. hmm ...very sad...simple n sharp it...
    Followin ur blog mate...i'm ur 40th (woh !!) follower... :-)

  5. Oh this is such a wonderful thought provoking and true poem. Very creative.


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