Your smell
Intoxicates
Lingers after you go
Stays with me when I am alone
Your stench
Written on: April 21, 2009 in The Writers Lounge.
Intoxicates
Lingers after you go
Stays with me when I am alone
Your stench
Written on: April 21, 2009 in The Writers Lounge.
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Tan this was beautiful until I got to the last line.
ReplyDelete"Stench" is a foul odors ... "aroma" might have been a better word, that is, unless you are intoxicated by "foul odors".
Ugh.... that had mixed feelings more on the ughh side..
ReplyDeleteHaiku poetry
Amias,
ReplyDeleteI used the word on purpose... to give that exact feeling... someone else told me about the word too, but then I think this suits better :)
Workhard,
'ughh side'?? hahahaha... possibly!!