Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Confinement



C
losed in a tank
O
nly to fake fun
N
o access to the world
F
unny for morons
I
ncarceration in all
N
ullified mobility
Echoes cruelty of
M
ankind
Entreating freedom
N
ot just awe
T
he fishes in glass tank

Written as prompted in: Acrostic Only

10 comments:

  1. The picture is beautiful, and the fish confinement is echoes in your acrostic.

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  2. well written!
    :)
    good job sir, as always!

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  3. HI.. nice poem, that is so true,how we zap other creatures freedom.. think of it, even birds also..


    Haiku Poems

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  4. Tan,
    I like the poem you did with the prompt, "Confinement"

    I think as time goes by you are learning to confine your lines a bit in your acrostics.

    I think...You did well with this one.

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  5. WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE APPROVED BEFORE A COMMENT IS SHOWED HERE.

    I REALLY DO NOT CARE FOR THAT KIND OF RESTRICTION ON A COMMENT I MIGHT WANT TO MAKE ON ANY BLOG.

    JUST MY OPINION.

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  6. Maggie, I removed it. I enabled this for a few days - just to check how it goes. I see YOU are not happy with Comment Moderation and hence, its GONE now!!!

    Abt your comment:
    You are right... I recently enjoyed a Workshop on Acrostics and that has taught me a few things about the format... So, putting in efforts to near these to perfection... Thanks for the thoughts :)

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  7. I really feel sorry for the animals who have lived their life in cages or tanks... I'm glad you are raising awareness of this and it has been writen very well.

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  8. Thanks everyone for the read. Read me again, and I will write more, for sure...

    Ahem! That was the Promise made!

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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