Thursday, February 19, 2009

Eternal Wait


How long will it last
I cannot love what I do not trust
Will there be any end
To this ETERNAL WAIT
Will there be any end
I cannot love what I do not trust
How long will it last

15 comments:

  1. Phew Tan, this is a big eternal question!

    Thanks for taking The NaisaiKu.. Challenge! this week.

    Clink~da~link!

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  2. Sometimes there seems to be more questions than answers - but you ask the questions so well, so poetically!

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  3. We desire and wait...we dont get and we loose faith

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  4. @ Wendy

    The Question stays ... when we have no answer, the best we can do is to ask ... I asked and I hope, I get an answer soon ... Amen!

    @ STG

    Thanks for your comment ... I just asked what I felt ... I'm happy you found a sense in that ...

    @ Megha

    Dont lose faith ... for all we can cling on to is faith and belief! If we lose hope and faith, we lose the charm of life ... keep hoping, loving, enjoying and writing ... and keep visiting my blog(s) too ... Cheers!!

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  5. Wow, you wrote another Naisaiku :D

    i like this line: I can not love what I do not trust!

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  6. Thanks Asbah .. thanks for visiting my blog and for commenting too ... keep visiting, at least in weekends, whenever you find time ... I will be happy :)

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  7. Love and trust - can't have one without the other.

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  8. This really spoke to me. The few times I have not trusted my husband has nicked away at the love. How long can the love last if it is not whole?

    Excellent job!

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  9. Hi Tan, the prompt at Sunday Scribblings this week is Trust, maybe you would like to post this poem there? If so, here's the address:
    http://sundayscribblings.blogspot.com

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  10. @ Stan

    Rightly said mate ... this was one thing that was on my mind while writing this ...

    @ Linda

    Love, Trust and faith are things that are of course missing in this modern age world ... The more you do these, the more you are at peace .. and more you get in return ... Thanks for visit ... keep visiting ...

    @ Wendy

    Thanks for the info ... Never knew about a concept like this - sunday scribblings!! YOu asked me to put it there - just done that!

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  11. Tan, I won't loose faith. I am a proud optimist :)
    Would keep visiting your blog, coz you'll keep writing better :)

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  12. Simple yet, powerful..
    Great thoughts here..Truly didactic!

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  13. I haven't tried this style yet - you do very well with it. Trust is surely an ephemeral concept.

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  14. this is so very true! i tried a relationship without trust (quite the opposite..) and it did not last. i can not love.. without trust. :T

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  15. @ Megha

    Thanks for that - thanks for encouraging me too ...

    @ Inversed Poignancy!

    Thanks a lot for the visit. I'm sure to have you visit and read me more

    @ Tumblewords

    Do try this NaisaiKu and other different styles of writing ... I love to experiment and when I get comments like yours, I get encouraged more and more!! Keep visiting ...

    @ Floreta

    You said it mate ... trust and hope are two things we cling onto while in a relationship ... Do trust - do love - do enjoy and be happy!! Thanks for the visit ...

    Cheers!!

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Warm Regards,
Tan :)

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